Weekend Writing Warriors 8 – 10/11/2020 – Untitled WIP

Welcome back Weekend Writing Warriors. Here we are back again for another week of sharing our writings with our tight knit community. I’ve said it before, I will say it again, I live for today. Don’t forget to catch everyone else’s snippet this week. There is some really good stuff here.

As for this WIP here, we are neck deep in our investigation.

We just discovered that there are four more cases possibly linked to this one case. Let’s pick up where we left off last week.

Here is a bit from our last snippet:

Carmen plopped down four files on the desk in front of Grady.

“Four cases?”

“All open and unsolved. No forensics linking anything or anyone to any of them.” Carmen explained.

“Until today,” said Grady.

“Until today.”

Lieutenant Daniel Masters is a 27-year veteran Savannah Georgia Major Crimes Detective. He has seen many crime scenes like the one he saw last February. Little did he know this one would change his life. Grady, the newest addition to his team, is the first to see the abnormalities, but will the rest of the team listen in time. There is a serial murder on the loose in South Georgia, and for some reason the killer leaves their final victim alive right before committing suicide. But why? Masters and Grady must find out before its too late and the next killer strikes again.

“Does Masters know?”

“Hey, I’m just finding all of this out myself,” she said. “I haven’t had the time to call him. He should be here any minute anyhow.”

Grady picked up the four files and looked through each one. Sure enough, each victims arm and leg cuts were identical to the cuts inflicted upon Mr. Nelson. However, there seemed to be one difference. In the photos, there was an excessive amount of blood, much more than the Nelson crime scene. One familiarity was that each victim was placed flat on a coffee table and was dressed in nothing but under garments.

***That is this week’s ten. Here is a bit more to complete this scene. ***

“Where were these other murders?”

“Two in Mississippi, one in Florida, the last in Alabama,” Carmen said with a bit of hesitance. “All in just the last nine months.”

“Are you serious?” Grady asked.

“That is as far as I set my parameters,” she said.

“So, there could be more?”

“Possibly,” she said.

“We need to call Masters,” Grady said.

“Call me for what?” A gruff voice called from the stairwell just as the entry buzzer sounded.

For the next half hour, Carmen filled in Masters on their discoveries. Masters went through two cups of coffee, taking it all in. Without interrupting, he allowed Carmen to give her point of view, her speculations, and even interjected Grady’s name here and there.

Grady learned that Masters was not as hard as he seemed to be. He was a reasonable man. At least when he respected you. And he could tell that he highly respected Carmen. He could only hope that he would earn that level of respect. He also understood that Carmen had worked for it, seeing her perform the last couple of hours.

“So, what do you think we should do next, Grady?” Masters asked, half looking at Carmen.

Was this a test? Grady looked at the files. He knew for now that Taylor would be a dead end. Their real lead would be the connection Taylor had to Nelson. And his first hunch was that there was a drug-running tie through his position as an Uber driver.

“Search Nelson’s car,” Grady said. “If he were running drugs, there would have to be evidence of it. We need to do it before he has a chance to dispose of it. While we are at it, we should search his place top to bottom. If we have a forensics team there, may as well sweep it for anything suspicious. Then we’d know for sure.”

Masters nodded. “Do it.”


And there we go, another layer deeper. More info on the four cases, but are they connected? Does Stuart Nelson know something that almost got him killed? What will they find when they search his car and home? We also see Masters testing the waters with Grady. Seeing if he can truly work a case. Will it pay off for him?

Next week I may skip ahead a bit as the remainder of this chapter just introduces the rest of Masters team and gives little action, and I really want to get into some meat of book. Well see what I can come up with. Either way, I am running out of what I can give you with this WIP.

Have a great week, and please check out the next box. My Thanksgiving Children’s book, Elissa Learns Thankfulness is on sale right now from the publisher!! It is a great read for your little one or an awesome gift idea. There are three other books in the series.

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Elissa Learns About Thankfulness
With Thanksgiving right around the corner, consider this charming story for your little reader. Book 4 in the Elissa the Curious Snail Series finds Elissa living with her human friend Francine. Elissa is sad because she cannot do some of the things her friends can do like fly or run. She eventually learns to be thankful for who she is and what she can do. Find out what that is when you cuddle up and read this book with your little one. It is available on Amazon at the link above.

Moments of the Heart is not just this website. I have a Facebook page that has something going on everyday of the week. Come on over, follow, and interact with my page to check it out! Here is what you can expect to find there.

Monday is Memory Monday – I share an important event that occurred on that Monday or sometime that particular week.
Tuesday is Talk About it Tuesday – I post a weekly video where I cover a topic that has meant something to me over the past week.
Wednesday is when I post my blog for the week.
Thursday is This or That Thursday – A weekly two option poll that raises the question, do you like this, or do you prefer that?
Friday is Fun Fact Friday – I find and share an interesting or obscure fact.
Saturday is for Weekend Writing Warriors – This is when I post my 8 Sentence Snippet from a current or past work.

I really am trying to make it fun and engaging. Something that people look forward to visiting. It has been something that has been on my heart (no pun intended) for a long time and I am now acting on it. I would love your support!!

Little Reminders of Who I Am is now available for purchase on Amazon, Barnes and Noble and other booksellers.

–The Five Barred Gate is still available on Amazon in Hardback, Paperback, and Kindle versions.

–You can purchase TFBG direct from me on my Home Page. The benefit of buying direct is you will receive a personalized signed copy!!

–My Children’s books, Elissa the Curious Snail are also on Amazon. There are 4 books about an adorable snail teaching children about prayer and believing in themselves.

–Finally you can see all updates regarding the progress of this current Untitled work in progress.

Fellow Warriors, I also have have a weekly blog that is posted in between these snippets. I would love to hear your thoughts.

AND if you have little warriors running around I now have many of my Children’s Short Stories on this website. They were originally on my Elissa the Curious Snail publisher’s website, but I now control that domain and have moved that content here. There are many stories for your little reader. These are great bedtime or anytime short stories.

In His Exciting Service,

Jeff S. Bray

Little Reminders of Who I Am

The Five Barred Gate

Elissa the Curious Snail Series

Check out amazing established and emerging writers at Weekend Writing Warriors. Each week we post new snippets from either published works or works in progress for each other to comment on. Gain insight of how the mind of a writer works and a behind the scenes look at works before they hit book stands everywhere.

14 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors 8 – 10/11/2020 – Untitled WIP

    1. Thanks for the tweet!! And we’ve only just begun. I am writing the next victim as we speak. It’s interesting and the way I write allows for the characters to take me where they want to go. Makes for a intriguing ride.

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    1. It is tough to write within a field I am unfamiliar with. But it is also fun. I get to research these areas and learn new and exciting things. It’s one of the facinating things about being a writer. Right?

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