Surprise Weekend Writing Warriors. One more snippet from me this year. I know I said I was done, but I decided to give a Christmas gift to all my Warrior buddies out there. And I have chosen to fast forward a few chapters and give you a recent snippet that I wrote during NaNoWriMo. I have sifted through the piles of chapters and found one that doesn’t reveal too much because I don’t want to give away any secrets of what happens. But I do want to whet your appetite of what Snippet Sundays are all about. I also wanted to give to give a Christmas gift to all my Weekend Writing Warrior pals our there.
So without further ado, here is a snippet from Chapter Ten. (We had left of in Chapter Five)
SYNOPSIS — UPDATED:
Detective James “Grady” Gradiosa, is a Savannah, Georgia detective who recently transferred from Atlanta. He relocated after his wife, Elizabeth, was promoted with her real estate firm. He is placed under the charge of Lieutenant Daniel Masters, a gruff 27-year Major Crimes veteran. They are immediately handed a case that will change their lives. Grady is the first to see the abnormalities. But will the rest of the team listen in time? There is a murder on the loose in South Georgia. For some reason, the killer leaves their final victim alive just before committing suicide by cop. But why? Masters and Grady must find out before it’s too late and the killer strikes again.
**We have introduced a new character by this point. His name is Dr. Dominick Glavine, a Chief Forensic Scientist. In this chapter Grady is going over evidence with him for the first time. They are trying to determine if the cases are connected. Grady has just asked him about the incisions being connected. As we open the scene, Dr. Glavine is speaking.**
“Perhaps. But with the unfortunate advancement of the internet, anyone can learn to make these types of incisions. And as I have stated, the first victim showed hesitation. That reveals lack of skill and confidence. A formally educated individual would have had cadaver practice and would not show hesitation earmarks. But that does not mean they do not have some medical training. You did say that Tanner spoke of the timing Nelson had left. That would require experience and not book knowledge of how long it takes for exsanguination to occur.”
“Yes, he did mention timing. And Tanner was right-handed,” Grady said.
***That is this week’s ten. Here is a bit more to finish out the snippet. A little long, but it is part of the Christmas bonus!!***
“Yes, his file said so.”
“We have been unable to make him for the first four.”
“Without seeing the lacerations to Nelson, I cannot make any speculations either way. Right hand or left hand there is another remarkable thing about your victim’s injuries.”
“What is that?” Grady asked.
“They appear to be made with the same type of weapon. Again, I cannot say with certainty that they are made with the same weapon, but the wounds are identical in every way. It would be simple to surmise that they are exacted by the same weapon. If it weren’t for the change of hand usage, I would conclude this is the work one individual with the same weapon.”
“Is that right?” Grady ears began to warm. The same weapon? How could that be?
The doctor continued, “Yes. If not the same weapon, definitely the same type of weapon. Most likely a surgical scalpel of some sort or perhaps a hobby knife. Thin blade, about inch, inch and a half in length.”
Not much more could come as a shock than the same weapon being used for all seven crimes. It didn’t seem possible, unless Tanner was not their guy, or there was another perp in that room and the suspect left before the big showdown. But there were no witness accounts of another suspect.
“Is that all?” Grady eventually asked.
“On the weapon, yes, without delving into further speculation. Photographically, the scenes appear the same, except for the chair, however. Why is the chair here?”
“Tanner sat in the chair waiting for the officers to arrive.” Grady went on to explain about Tanner’s final moments, his chanting, the two officers ending his life, and the missing weapon Glavine had just concluded was the possible murder weapon in the new homicides.
“Chanting. Interesting,” Dr. Glavine began to squint again, staring at Tanner’s crime scene photos and reading over the transcript again. “I may have more for you on this later. I need to research a few things. I cannot speculate on things without having all the facts and conjecture would only hinder your investigation. Can I hold on to these two photos for now? And make copies of this transcript?”
“Certainly, Doctor. Whatever you need to do that helps you catch our killer,” Grady said.
I really hope you enjoyed the surprise extended Christmas edition snippet. If you read carefully you notice there has been two more murders. Both of these are much different than the Nelson fiasco, and much more similar to what Grady found within the first four crime scene files. Exciting stuff and Dr. Glavine seems to have some answers. And a little bit more about Dr. Glavine, he will be a big player in the novel to figuring out the whole thing. I really enjoyed writing his character. Anyhow thanks for reading. Happy Holidays!!
I am back on track, writing away on this WIP. So far I have two more chapters written and have offed a character or two. Things are getting good and going as planned. I am just glad to be over the dry spell I found myself in and now back on track. I really want to get this piece written. Thanks again to every Warrior who has added to this piece. Happy New Year to you all!! Talk with you in 2021!!
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15 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors 8 – 12/27/2020 – Untitled WIP”
The mention of chanting really caught my attention!
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It caught the good Dr.’s attention as well.
I can hardly wait for the doc to share what he suspects!
Glad your writing! The busyness of holiday prep, and working 10 hour days a lot in December made me a little crazy. I NEEDED to write. And I missed the weekly interaction with other writers here on wewriwa. I feel your relief. lol
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With all the cloudiness it was difficult to write. I feel much clearer and I have knocked out two more chapters and Grady and Masters are on their way to solving this whole thing. But it will take a bit longer to get there and a big setback will hinder their investigation. Dum… Dum… Dum…
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A string of murders, all with the same MO (or at least staged that way!). So, glad you’re continuing to tease us with this story as you’re working on it. Happy holidays to you and your family!
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Yes, I wanted to write one more before closing the book on them. I’m not yet sure what I will be doing come January. I don’t want to give too much. Happy holidays to you and hope your New Year is celebratory!!
Interesting snippet, always good to have another brilliant mind on the case AND more details. (Not saying more murders are a good thing though…) This is a fascinating case.
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Thank you and yes it is. The good Doctor was a fun character to write. I had originally written him just one scene. But revisited him and his lab to tie up a loose end, then the rest is history, he became a major player in the novel.
One of the benefits of being a mild Panster, you are not stuck with an outline and can and or subtract as needed.
Looks like they’re a step closer to figuring out this mystery – although I bet it’ll raise more questions for them too.
Hey Jeff, checking in on you. How’s the writing coming? Having Masters and Grady solved the murder yet?
How’s that TX weather?
Do you know you have a solar eclipse coming up in a few years?
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Wrote a bit today as a matter of fact, but not as far as I would like to be in my work in progress. They are at the point where they have figured out what is going on, but now have to catch the perpetrator.
Texas weather is on a roller coaster. Warm then cold. We’re about to get cold again, I think.
Yes, I believe I heard something about the eclipse. I am usually pretty up to date on the solar stuff. Haven’t been keeping too much an eye on it lately though with all my health issues. I missed the “Christmas Star” due to overcast skies. It peaked through for about two minutes. That’s it though.
I appreciate you checking in. I have been considering just writing a blog and posting it in the WeWriWa. But have yet to. I miss the group. This last week I commented on a few of the entries. I need to do more, I miss the group.
Hey Jeff, hope you’re up to writing these days. Sometimes the winter months give me writer’s block. It was nice seeing your comments today. Sending hugs your way. Hope you, the missus, and the kiddos are all good. 🙂
Checking in. How are those detectives doing? 🙂
I’m still around. They are doing well. I’m writing again and into the next couple of chapters. I may give another snippet in the coming weeks, but giving anything now would give away what happens in the book. I may try and find a section that is a bit ambiguous. But other than that, the door has closed on snippets on this WIP. I want to keep people guessing 😉